i did leave but i came back
I thought you said you were leaving lol
I agree with Katze. Didn't realize the friction until I read her comment. The track's a little repetive. To my ears, the vocals are the most tired after repetition, so you should change them at 00:53 or sooner, maybe cut them up and rearrange them or pitch stretch - 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨. Also, you could harmonize the piano at some point. This track is an interesting combonation and I think it has a lot of potential🙂
None of the elements seem to be in key with each other.
no problemo buddy... it was really good... i like your stuff
this is what i hear every story everything