Cool start! Very nice combo of clips/sounds. When the heavy bass comes in, try lowering the volume. Check where the clip is lined up, it doesn't feel like it is within the beat or at the start of the melodic phrase (see me if you aren't sure how to adjust it). Same with that gritty growl sound, which is cool...but overwhelms what is going on in your song and almost sounds like 2 songs competing in a non-cohesive way. There is a sort of reggae grove to it, why not play that up more than the gritty sounds? Or, simply de-emphasize the gritty sounds. Good start!
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Smerkalot
Cool start! Very nice combo of clips/sounds. When the heavy bass comes in, try lowering the volume. Check where the clip is lined up, it doesn't feel like it is within the beat or at the start of the melodic phrase (see me if you aren't sure how to adjust it). Same with that gritty growl sound, which is cool...but overwhelms what is going on in your song and almost sounds like 2 songs competing in a non-cohesive way. There is a sort of reggae grove to it, why not play that up more than the gritty sounds? Or, simply de-emphasize the gritty sounds. Good start!