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Smerkalot Avatar
Smerkalot
about 9 years ago

Your commentators above are right on the money, the clips are not lined up 35 seconds in. This could be because something is not the same BPM as the rest. This really needs to be fixed. Not to mention, blahblahblah was right that you have multiple keys happening here and it is clashing. You could take one out and add a heaver beat or new rhythm.

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blahblahblah
about 9 years ago

I really like how you added more clips to the song. They blend in perfectly together. At 00:35, the off beat sounds like a minor chord, and it sounds like it is a little off tune. You could change the chord to something that sounds a little more smoother, because the song is smooth at the beginning, but at 00:35, it sounds a little less smooth. I like the rest of the song though!

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djjeyz
about 9 years ago

I really like how in the first half how you blended the clips, they really fit together well to make the song sound great. Towards the third half of the song I didn't really think the two clips blended together to well but it still worked, pretty great song!

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