Your A section is good, but I would keep the synth line going through it the whole time instead of cutting out halfway through. Your B section is pretty solid, but your C section seems to have a couple themes instead of one main melody through the whole section. Try to pick your favorite synth line and build it up instead of using three or four synth parts. Ask me if you have questions, this is a REALLY great start! It won't take much to make this an A plus project:)
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Lantz Beatz
Your A section is good, but I would keep the synth line going through it the whole time instead of cutting out halfway through. Your B section is pretty solid, but your C section seems to have a couple themes instead of one main melody through the whole section. Try to pick your favorite synth line and build it up instead of using three or four synth parts. Ask me if you have questions, this is a REALLY great start! It won't take much to make this an A plus project:)