Wow, this has a lot going on! The good thing is, I can hear the A section repeat itself. The bad thing is, all three of your sections seem to have mini sections inside of them so it confuses me as a listener. For example, your A section is the clearest, but it seems to have a first half with a melody and a second half with a different melody. Pick the half you like the best and cut the rest of it, this way your A section has focus. You're going to have to edit out your favorite stuff in your B and C sections as well, but fortunately you have a lot of good stuff to choose from!
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Lantz Beatz
Wow, this has a lot going on! The good thing is, I can hear the A section repeat itself. The bad thing is, all three of your sections seem to have mini sections inside of them so it confuses me as a listener. For example, your A section is the clearest, but it seems to have a first half with a melody and a second half with a different melody. Pick the half you like the best and cut the rest of it, this way your A section has focus. You're going to have to edit out your favorite stuff in your B and C sections as well, but fortunately you have a lot of good stuff to choose from!