Drums should be quite a bit softer to fit the vibe. The wierd chromatic percussion sounding thing sounds a bit off key. Also please those strings or brass or whatever tf that is in the last section, 1. A good deal more quiet 2. Have a more complex melody besides 2 notes/chords going back and forth.
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@TheDutchman I do agree, the kick could have been nicer, I was experimenting with beats and whatnot
DUTCH
The uran kick is a turnoff for this. either shorten the kick up or get another kick. Further what Phantom sais. Sounds good so far!
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@Phantomtracks Thanks for the feedback, I completely forgot you had a song like this. The beat tho, was actually inspired by M.G.S.....
SoulessAroun'
It also seems like you were trying to make something that sounded like my song "Pestilence" without the intention of directly copying it.
SoulessAroun'
Drums should be quite a bit softer to fit the vibe. The wierd chromatic percussion sounding thing sounds a bit off key. Also please those strings or brass or whatever tf that is in the last section, 1. A good deal more quiet 2. Have a more complex melody besides 2 notes/chords going back and forth.
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lol i might
Nitrate Embers
WO, Mighty senpai, teach me your ways...
Nitrate Embers
Don't you mean =STUFFS= XD
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stuffs
Nitrate Embers
Darnit I meant what's dis?