The very beginning doesn't sound like it should continue into the song, maybe have it play with the other clip but softer. The part that comes in at just before 1:30 should maybe come in just a little bit sooner.
I enjoyed hearing to your song.I liked how you kept one rhythm throughout your project. In the middle of the song, it sounded like you ended it. Also, the rhythm at :25 went for a long times. You also stayed on tempo.
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Smerkalot
The very beginning doesn't sound like it should continue into the song, maybe have it play with the other clip but softer. The part that comes in at just before 1:30 should maybe come in just a little bit sooner.
Dogz241
I enjoyed hearing to your song.I liked how you kept one rhythm throughout your project. In the middle of the song, it sounded like you ended it. Also, the rhythm at :25 went for a long times. You also stayed on tempo.