This sounds alright but the drums seem a little too punchy, I don't really like the noise you introduced at 0:31 because I don't think that it goes with the melody, and the part where you stop the song feels empty. Also maybe a little more variation with the piano. Hopefully my advice helps :)
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Dr.Music
I agree with B L 4 C K
Lil'Reaper BeatFactory
Ait.
TENEBRIS
This sounds alright but the drums seem a little too punchy, I don't really like the noise you introduced at 0:31 because I don't think that it goes with the melody, and the part where you stop the song feels empty. Also maybe a little more variation with the piano. Hopefully my advice helps :)