I like the arp that comes in at 00:20. Drums need some sound design. The piano has a nice melody, however you may want to consider using a GM-2 chromatic percussion instead. The outro is lacking an atmosphere. Other wise sound pretty good. :)
aint bad for a beginner, youll defo grow. nice melody
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K I T C S H (PolyVersse)
I like the arp that comes in at 00:20. Drums need some sound design. The piano has a nice melody, however you may want to consider using a GM-2 chromatic percussion instead. The outro is lacking an atmosphere. Other wise sound pretty good. :)
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aint bad for a beginner, youll defo grow. nice melody