No, pls not with the mono.
Firstly, you need to have more harmony with your notes. That undertone sound beneath the melody isn't in the right key.
Secondly, too loud.
Thirdly, you should use a different instrument. Mono is usually only good for little beeps in your main melodies. Also, when using mono you should usually turn it down to at least half volume if not more.
Good luck in the future. PM me if you have any questions.
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TENEBRIS
No, pls not with the mono. Firstly, you need to have more harmony with your notes. That undertone sound beneath the melody isn't in the right key. Secondly, too loud. Thirdly, you should use a different instrument. Mono is usually only good for little beeps in your main melodies. Also, when using mono you should usually turn it down to at least half volume if not more. Good luck in the future. PM me if you have any questions.