Revenue (LISTEN & LIKE PLEASE!)

I'm lovin this especially the beginning I had washed it never ended but it is what it is. Beautiful

https://soundcloud.com/ntiemetic/anima like this one

try some hi hats

You should try putting more effort into your sounds. the composition is great, but the sounds are lacking in originality.

Thanks!

pretty good

Its nice but its empty maybe add more instruments and it needs a bass and all that other stuff.

I like it a lot lol

Feedback? no one really looks at my work anymore.