One thing I am noticing is that some new sounds are introduced a little abruptly in the middle of a measure or at an odd measure. Same with dropping sounds off. At 45 seconds it feels like this suddenly changes to a new song. There are still a few BPM issues in that two clips, particularly in the middle, do not seem to be the same. Keep composing, you are definitely on the right track! I like the experimentation with effects in this song.
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Smerkalot
One thing I am noticing is that some new sounds are introduced a little abruptly in the middle of a measure or at an odd measure. Same with dropping sounds off. At 45 seconds it feels like this suddenly changes to a new song. There are still a few BPM issues in that two clips, particularly in the middle, do not seem to be the same. Keep composing, you are definitely on the right track! I like the experimentation with effects in this song.