Nice Job, Aidan! A few things: LOVE the A section. I would take out the hi hat transitions, you don't need them. right down they only make the piece longer. I would check the rhythms in the B section and make sure they line up properly, then add a melody line (something you can sing, like a synth or a bass part). Your C section works well, I wouldn't touch it. Those are the only things I would change, great work!
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Lantz Beatz
Nice Job, Aidan! A few things: LOVE the A section. I would take out the hi hat transitions, you don't need them. right down they only make the piece longer. I would check the rhythms in the B section and make sure they line up properly, then add a melody line (something you can sing, like a synth or a bass part). Your C section works well, I wouldn't touch it. Those are the only things I would change, great work!