Hey Belle! Great start. Honestly, you have a good A and B section, they each have a melody and a rhythm. I would work on perfecting your C section so it sounds more together. Then, don't forget to add another A section on the end (ABACA). Try these fixes, see me if you need any help!
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measoccer20
I love your B section!
Lantz Beatz
Hey Belle! Great start. Honestly, you have a good A and B section, they each have a melody and a rhythm. I would work on perfecting your C section so it sounds more together. Then, don't forget to add another A section on the end (ABACA). Try these fixes, see me if you need any help!