Ok, here's what I have to say about this track. Both the part where it starts to after the break are boring to listen to. It basically sounded like the same. What you need is stuff like at the end, the drums were nice. However, you should have made a lot more variation in the song, and the second half needed to be ramped up, otherwise there's no point in making a break in the song. You might be on to something if you can just make the song have more life to it.
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D~(0)~M
Everyone starts out not being the best at it, I think you can get a lot better ;)
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I know, but it's not exactly something I worked on much. Besides, I'm not the best there is at making music. Thanks for your opinion.
D~(0)~M
Ok, here's what I have to say about this track. Both the part where it starts to after the break are boring to listen to. It basically sounded like the same. What you need is stuff like at the end, the drums were nice. However, you should have made a lot more variation in the song, and the second half needed to be ramped up, otherwise there's no point in making a break in the song. You might be on to something if you can just make the song have more life to it.