You can name this something other than P3 Project! :) The song is very cool and relaxed with a funky beat, nicely done! I like how you experimented with the FX, but I would recommend turning the volume down on that clip with the FX treatment as it is overpowering the other clips and channels. Plan a stronger ending.
Constructive Criticism:
- Make the song have a high point then drop the beat so it doesn't have close to the same beat most of the song. - Make your ending longer, it is only about two seconds.
Positive feedback: -Layered good, no editing errors, it fits perfectly together.
-I like the distortion in your song, it sounds good, but not too distorted.
-I like the change of music. it works well together and flows.
-No clashing keys.
-Good volume, not too loud.
The thing i liked about your song is that at 10 seconds you added the orchestra instruments to it. A suggestion i would like to make is at the end you could have done like a fade away not just ending it, to have more of a better ending not just stopping the song. I really like your song a lot, i think you should really make it longer! Good job!
Comments
Smerkalot
You can name this something other than P3 Project! :) The song is very cool and relaxed with a funky beat, nicely done! I like how you experimented with the FX, but I would recommend turning the volume down on that clip with the FX treatment as it is overpowering the other clips and channels. Plan a stronger ending.
Big_g_93
Constructive Criticism: - Make the song have a high point then drop the beat so it doesn't have close to the same beat most of the song. - Make your ending longer, it is only about two seconds.
Big_g_93
Positive feedback: -Layered good, no editing errors, it fits perfectly together. -I like the distortion in your song, it sounds good, but not too distorted. -I like the change of music. it works well together and flows. -No clashing keys. -Good volume, not too loud.
starbucks_2340
The thing i liked about your song is that at 10 seconds you added the orchestra instruments to it. A suggestion i would like to make is at the end you could have done like a fade away not just ending it, to have more of a better ending not just stopping the song. I really like your song a lot, i think you should really make it longer! Good job!