Good start Julie! The only problem is I here an A B A C form, there is no A on the end. Also, your second A section is different from the first. I like the second one better, so I'd add the rhythm clips to the first time you use it as well. Your B section is solid, but a little long. Cut some of it at the beginning and it will be great! I think I like your C section the best, very cool. Ask me if you need help, I'll explain more in depth if you need it. Good luck with the corrections!
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ReadinMusic DJ
OMG awesome A section! I really like the b section too! I dont like the c though. All in all it's so awesome!!! GJ
Lantz Beatz
Good start Julie! The only problem is I here an A B A C form, there is no A on the end. Also, your second A section is different from the first. I like the second one better, so I'd add the rhythm clips to the first time you use it as well. Your B section is solid, but a little long. Cut some of it at the beginning and it will be great! I think I like your C section the best, very cool. Ask me if you need help, I'll explain more in depth if you need it. Good luck with the corrections!