I really LOVE your A section, make it longer (stretch the clips, NOT add more sounds). Your B section could use some editing: the section needs to be shorter, and some of the clips sound like they are fighting each other. Pick the one you like best and make it the star! I'd keep your C section the way it is, and then cut the ending altogether, your A section is strong enough to handle being the end. Great work, Jake!
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Lantz Beatz
I really LOVE your A section, make it longer (stretch the clips, NOT add more sounds). Your B section could use some editing: the section needs to be shorter, and some of the clips sound like they are fighting each other. Pick the one you like best and make it the star! I'd keep your C section the way it is, and then cut the ending altogether, your A section is strong enough to handle being the end. Great work, Jake!