24 seconds in, the clip added in there is a contrasting melody, and you can probably take it out. The beginning of your song has a clip I feel is the heart of the song and really needs to be continued through to the end. I do like your ending rhythms though, so perhaps you can keep those in.
I really like this song, and I like how it builds up in the beginning. I think that at 00:27 it sounds a little off beat. I think that you could move the new sound at 00:27 a little earlier, because it sounds like it came in early and ended a little early. Otherwise, i really like this song.
I really liked the song but some of it was a little repetitive and some of it didn't fit together properly. This song was still greatly composed and it sounded great.
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Smerkalot
24 seconds in, the clip added in there is a contrasting melody, and you can probably take it out. The beginning of your song has a clip I feel is the heart of the song and really needs to be continued through to the end. I do like your ending rhythms though, so perhaps you can keep those in.
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I really like this song, and I like how it builds up in the beginning. I think that at 00:27 it sounds a little off beat. I think that you could move the new sound at 00:27 a little earlier, because it sounds like it came in early and ended a little early. Otherwise, i really like this song.
Chaossilencer13
I really liked the song but some of it was a little repetitive and some of it didn't fit together properly. This song was still greatly composed and it sounded great.