All of the Above

Thanks everyone! I am happy to hear that it's a good start. I'll work on a VIP at some point. As for now, different things are on my mind production-wise.

My problem is that for the most part there is only one idea just played on different instruments, there are no clear harmony/melody, it's all jumbled into one, instead of just doing octave doubling ,you should try to introduce new ideas as it progresses rather than just new instruments (e.g. a nice arpeggio played on a plucky synth or mono or something) otherwise I actually really enjoyed listening to it, especially where you bring the drums in.

yea any song can be redone but its about redoing it better and fixing mistakes in the previous version

Thanks for the feeback! Oozzie, I realize that this song is extremely repetitive, and that was by design. It could use some work, to make it seem more like a song, then a repeating loop. Thanks for listening. Do you think it's worth a remaster/VIP? If so, I will see what I can do.

pretty good, i would suggest adding a few variations in the keyline here and there, subtle but obvious ones that'll stand out and probably take the listener by surprise, and since the keyline plays twice before a new instrument is introduced, try adding some kind of build up factor before a new instrument comes in like some reverse symbols, white noise rising in volume or a kick or snare growing more and more frequent.just a suggestion

not bad i like this. i think you should try to create some custom sounds in the wubmachine