choking on my own blood

??

just put the note up an octave for like a half note

idek how to add slides

when you take out the melody to me it makes the bass hit harder

the bass is too repetitive, maybe change it up of add some slides. And I don't know why you took out the melody

or maybe, where far away from each other

Or you live in a different time zone

That means my time might be wrong. I'll check my phone.

bed not bad

i go to bad at like 2 or 3