Overall, everything is well balanced and the timing is spot on, but the sense of progression could use some work.
Anyways, that's my 2 cents. I hope you found my feedback helpful somehow!
That being said, the song is still a little repetitive, and beyond the introduction and the conclusion, there's not much sense of progression. I'd suggest playing around with not only different chord progressions/harmonics, but also with different beats and even maybe try subtly changing the melody every now and then with some added backup sounds to support the original or new melody.
At 1:43-1:45, 2:38-2:40, and 3:32-3:35, the Dropoffs seem out of place. A Dropoff Transition is basically when you take a part [Say the melody], fade it out, and then proceed to the entrance of something new. This is usually done by lowering the volume and dragging out the sound over time to create a "Fading" effect. The time that it takes to do this can vary depending on tempo and style of the song, but this Transitional Effect usually only works with the final moments of a build before a big drop, or as you used here, at the end of a song. I did like that you tried to mix things up though!
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sky.47
this reminds me of the gravity falls theme song
Shooki
Thank you so much for your feedback its helping me a lot being that i am so young and i'm trying to make it this means a lot to me
reptilian
I like it alot, It is balanced so well
Skyfire
Overall, everything is well balanced and the timing is spot on, but the sense of progression could use some work. Anyways, that's my 2 cents. I hope you found my feedback helpful somehow!
Skyfire
That being said, the song is still a little repetitive, and beyond the introduction and the conclusion, there's not much sense of progression. I'd suggest playing around with not only different chord progressions/harmonics, but also with different beats and even maybe try subtly changing the melody every now and then with some added backup sounds to support the original or new melody.
Skyfire
At 1:43-1:45, 2:38-2:40, and 3:32-3:35, the Dropoffs seem out of place. A Dropoff Transition is basically when you take a part [Say the melody], fade it out, and then proceed to the entrance of something new. This is usually done by lowering the volume and dragging out the sound over time to create a "Fading" effect. The time that it takes to do this can vary depending on tempo and style of the song, but this Transitional Effect usually only works with the final moments of a build before a big drop, or as you used here, at the end of a song. I did like that you tried to mix things up though!