Thanks for your feedback David :) I'll certainly take your advice on board. I think your first advice sounds really good. I tried to make my song as long as a lot of music video audios that I've seen, which last for just over 3 mins. My response to your question is that you'll have to wait and see
Yo. Nice Music. Here's a tip. First, try adding different sounds along with the others. 2nd Make it a little shorter. Check out my music. I think my best song is milk. You will have lot's of hits. Great Job. I'll follow you. When is your next song?